The title’s wordplay about putting hats on customers is the only clear idea here, and the body text never explains what it actually refers to, so a reader lands without context. Before publishing, add two or three plain sentences stating what the action is, when it happens, and who it is for. Also check that the category label and the stray link at the end are intentional, since they read like leftover drafts rather than part of the post.
The title’s wordplay about putting hats on customers is the only clear idea here, and the body text never explains what it actually refers to, so a reader lands without context. Before publishing, add two or three plain sentences stating what the action is, when it happens, and who it is for. Also check that the category label and the stray link at the end are intentional, since they read like leftover drafts rather than part of the post.